我也喜欢学习外语,因为现在外语太重要了,读完楼主的这段短文,开始的时候我一位是说得东祥的真事呢,后来发现是一段笑话,以后最好写身边的真人真事,这样才能起到提高的作用,总之,不错.
明显的错误:
i walk to dongxiang in the morning,i see many peoples.
时态不对 看你后面 应该是过去完成时,许多人应该是:various people吧
出租车为什么不用taxi?cab含义还广一些
all at once,a man was hit by a cab in the street.he was brought to the hospital,his wife who was standing up by his bed, said to the doctor:"i think that he is very ill.""i am afraid that he is dead."said the doctor.
hearing this,the man moved his head and said:"i'm not dead,i'm still alive.""be quiet,"said the wife"the doctor knows better than you!"